I think you need to put in some sort of a kick.
And also turn down at the high frequencies, and turn up the lows.
Aka, left side of the eq goes up, right side goes down.
The beat is pretty good, and the synth is cool.
Theres a few parts where you could take out one or two beats in the synth, but besides that its pretty good for a first time song.
ah, thank you! ;-)
i Know about all that high frequenties, I wanted to make a new version now from all my songs, but.. i don't have the .flp file of this song, and neither from some other songs anymore :-/
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